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What can I ad to what the others have said... I also loved your Treasure, very melodic and rhythmic, Excellent my friend :-)
posted by
Sinome
on May 3, 2008 at 5:42 PM
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U always have rhythm,style,art...& I see clearly, a lot of heart.Nice beat
SHALOM FRIEND,
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on May 3, 2008 at 5:29 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on May 3, 2008 at 5:27 PM
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A very beautiful write, keep sharing. From my
to your
.
posted by
cmhnord
on May 3, 2008 at 2:30 PM
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I didn't waht to get off the ship
Beautiful! perfectly written.
Solita
posted by
ace2inspire
on May 3, 2008 at 8:50 AM
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Rhyming poetry is a challenge but you have impeccable rhythm. This was a magnificent piece, CR!!!!!!! No doubt in my mind your daughters are safe beneath your wings.
posted by
Troosha
on May 3, 2008 at 8:50 AM
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I want to cry...this is beautiful
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 2, 2008 at 7:39 PM
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Wonderful, wonderful work.
I can see you and your treasures.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on May 2, 2008 at 7:03 PM
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hey shelley
A great way to treasure.. wonderful write.
Thanks for dropping by earlier and great to see you in my blog.
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on May 2, 2008 at 6:54 PM
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I'll guide your way! 
Moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on May 2, 2008 at 6:40 PM
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Smooth sailing imagery my friend! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 2, 2008 at 6:39 PM
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this is too cool!!! the images are awesome!!!
posted by
RomaKay
on May 2, 2008 at 4:53 PM
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I love this poem...
...it has the cadence and momentum of a ballad.
posted by
metalrat
on May 2, 2008 at 4:29 PM
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posted by
jmh256
on May 2, 2008 at 4:18 PM
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Good work, despite the freakin' rhymes LOL
posted by
Ariala
on May 2, 2008 at 3:28 PM
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very original
posted by
NighthawkNY
on May 2, 2008 at 3:01 PM
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