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purple
my daughter always dont fuss over something you cant change
posted by
Lanetay
on May 4, 2008 at 7:45 PM
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Hey, babycakes,
I'm amazed so much wisdom flows from one so young every single day; then you tie it together with your compelling songs and vivid imagery. I always know I'm in for a treat when I visit your site. I love you and I love your creative consistency! You blow me away with every writing I am blessed to read! You go, girl!
CEECakes
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on May 4, 2008 at 1:46 PM
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Very interesting! Food for thought!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 4, 2008 at 12:33 PM
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So heartfelt and accompanied by your sensitive pictures. thanks for visiting me.
posted by
vogue
on May 4, 2008 at 9:18 AM
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Purple
You
do pour your heart into each piece....
posted by
Troosha
on May 4, 2008 at 8:39 AM
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Hey........my purple.....
posted by
Star5_
on May 4, 2008 at 7:53 AM
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Good work!
But I wonder if Blogit kills the poet, by forcing them to write every day. If you sat on a poem for a week or two imagine what you could do. You would blow us away!
Perhaps you should write a great epic poem...
posted by
Antipodean
on May 4, 2008 at 7:39 AM
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Profound and inspiring poem indeed !
posted by
afzal50
on May 4, 2008 at 4:00 AM
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Such thought and depth with and through your writing ~ and passion, just touches my heart Dear Jen
u ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 3, 2008 at 9:41 PM
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Gawd Jen, what a beautiful poem...Yes, I am afraid to agree with Teddy but if... If I could change the world I would do things so differently. Maybe I would not annoy people with my relentless ranting and we would still be friends. I guess we all wish at one time or another we could change the world...but can you imagine the responsibility? What if we made a mistake? What if...? But just thinking about it is thrilling isn't it. Changing things to fit our hearts desire... Mmmmm what a delicious dream. as delicious as your poem dear Mermaid.
posted by
Sinome
on May 3, 2008 at 8:57 PM
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If....very well-done, J!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 3, 2008 at 6:37 PM
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