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for me it was like is Mother earth claiming you as one of hers...
posted by
thecryptkeeper
on May 6, 2008 at 4:43 PM
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Great imagery
posted by
jmh256
on May 6, 2008 at 2:48 PM
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Good morning. I am doing better today, how about you? Love to you forever my dear, mom!
posted by
sam444
on May 6, 2008 at 2:02 PM
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Jump off the wire and hope to be caught? Takes a very brave woman to do that. Great poem my dear and a haunting picture to match. You know, everything to do with water and the ocean fascinates me. I am soo pleased to see more entries of yours, so obviously you are better.
posted by
vogue
on May 6, 2008 at 8:47 AM
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LIFE
CAN BE TOUGH, REALITY HITS HARD SOMETIMES. WONDERFULLY WRITTEN, AS USUAL YOU NEVER CEASE TO AMAZE ME. jesse
posted by
jesse_jean
on May 6, 2008 at 7:43 AM
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Sooooo beautiful.
As always!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on May 6, 2008 at 7:26 AM
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Such a beautifully haunting piece dear Jen......
I have missed you so; I hope you are well and thank you for the awesome poetry; God bless dear heart
posted by
mariaki
on May 6, 2008 at 4:47 AM
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Five
's Jen..Just lovely..
posted by
Wigopa_
on May 5, 2008 at 11:14 PM
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embracing love, does wonders for the soul!
posted by
yellowrose55
on May 5, 2008 at 10:45 PM
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awesome....
posted by
Star5_
on May 5, 2008 at 9:50 PM
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Sooo beautiful, the songs really ad a lot to the presentation but the poem is marvelous on its own :-)
posted by
Sinome
on May 5, 2008 at 7:52 PM
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Hi Mermaid
I love it!! I missed your work while I was gone... :)
posted by
Loribeth215
on May 5, 2008 at 7:22 PM
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...it sounds like love to me...moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on May 5, 2008 at 7:08 PM
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So much depth...you are doing well Dear Jen ~ so much through your writing. So touching ~
u Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 5, 2008 at 6:30 PM
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Reality is tougher indeed !
posted by
afzal50
on May 5, 2008 at 6:23 PM
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yes sweetheart very beautiful
posted by
Kabu
on May 5, 2008 at 6:00 PM
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Purple Mermaid, sensual imagery, romantic movement, excellent!
posted by
BC-A
on May 5, 2008 at 5:43 PM
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