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Powerful and brilliant, love this. From my
to your
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posted by
cmhnord
on May 7, 2008 at 2:56 PM
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It's not always as easy as it sounds-but how right you are CRS! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on May 7, 2008 at 7:58 AM
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totally agreed
and a fine poem too
posted by
lionreign
on May 7, 2008 at 7:52 AM
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Wow! This is so very exact! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 7, 2008 at 6:20 AM
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awesome CR ...and so true.
I might change that last line ... if it were me writing it (keeping with the gravity line) ... to "boobs you can not save"
muah
posted by
VictoriaP
on May 7, 2008 at 5:59 AM
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wise message my dear...well said!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on May 7, 2008 at 4:21 AM
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You've got that right! Moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on May 7, 2008 at 3:33 AM
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Nice
A slim and witty illustration on the curse of life. You said an entire novel within just a few lines. Don't you just love poetry?
posted by
jpart122500
on May 6, 2008 at 10:21 PM
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posted by
whirlwindaffair
on May 6, 2008 at 9:59 PM
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cr
live your life to the best and I know you are
posted by
Lanetay
on May 6, 2008 at 9:49 PM
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I totally agree with kolekshuns, this is excellent! I love poems like this, a little dark but still thought provoking and full of life. Bravo!! :-)
posted by
Sinome
on May 6, 2008 at 9:28 PM
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Excellent, excellent poem!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on May 6, 2008 at 9:14 PM
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