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The only person who can carry you that extra mile my friend
is you - with God's help - it's amazing how no matter what we are going through we almost always manage to get through without too many scars...... excellent piece; thank you
posted by
mariaki
on May 8, 2008 at 3:34 AM
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posted by
NighthawkNY
on May 7, 2008 at 10:14 PM
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Love this...When you wish not to be alone during your trials and such you are...No one carries anyone that extra mile. We all live life alone even when we are not. Excellent read
posted by
dpaulinomorris24
on May 7, 2008 at 7:15 PM
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A very brilliant write, keep sharing. From my
to your
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posted by
cmhnord
on May 7, 2008 at 2:43 PM
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I like it that the onus has a cliffhanger appeal and the reader can decide the outcome! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 7, 2008 at 12:12 PM
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I like this very much--it's practical, but hopeful.
posted by
jmh256
on May 7, 2008 at 12:06 PM
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