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I like your couplet, they build great imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 9, 2008 at 6:48 AM
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this is so beautiful!
"so many sleepless nights have past
" is i guess what makes your words sound so familiar & make my heart melt! 
posted by
pelagus
on May 9, 2008 at 4:01 AM
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Excellent!
However you've found the right words!
posted by
BC-A
on May 9, 2008 at 3:59 AM
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