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excellent ~ held me captive and so rich ~
~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 13, 2008 at 6:17 AM
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You had me captured. What a great ending! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 13, 2008 at 6:02 AM
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sensual and awesome write...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on May 12, 2008 at 11:46 PM
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WOW! what an awesome write..
posted by
Wigopa_
on May 12, 2008 at 10:30 PM
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Highly fascinating and passionate ..
posted by
afzal50
on May 12, 2008 at 5:33 PM
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Guess I should get my head out of the gutter... LOL
posted by
Troosha
on May 12, 2008 at 11:58 AM
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Bluehands, that's quite a poem for a fourteen-year-old. I definitely remember my first flight (both kinds). Thanks for visiting my blog. It reminded me that I had not been to read you for a while and that I must be missing some good stuff.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 12, 2008 at 11:50 AM
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FYI: I wrote this poem when I first learned about rocket engine propulsion before my hormones ever kicked in, before sex was even on my radar. The poem was written at 14. At the time I had no understanding of sexual inuendos but funny how this is loaded with them. Enjoy the read.
posted by
thecryptkeeper
on May 12, 2008 at 11:08 AM
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You are blessed with words.
Oh my God, you are good. You are so blessed with words. It is so good and intense. I am just lost for words.hmmmmm. This is good.
posted by
safriyie
on May 12, 2008 at 11:01 AM
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Excellent, Shailey!
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 12, 2008 at 10:26 AM
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Blue
If I interpreted this correctly.... ooh, lah, lah
posted by
Troosha
on May 12, 2008 at 10:12 AM
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