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so beautiful!!!!!!
posted by
RomaKay
on May 18, 2008 at 6:39 PM
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soulfelt
This was heartfelt....took me to a personal home going service, where the same emotions were experienced. I pray you have peace.
TThanks also for your comments on my poem.
posted by
Rexx_D_Artist
on May 14, 2008 at 10:18 PM
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very sad. Nice reading. i appreciate your comments on my bog too. thanks.
posted by
safriyie
on May 14, 2008 at 2:47 PM
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Lady
I could feel the pain....
posted by
Troosha
on May 14, 2008 at 8:33 AM
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That was so beautiful!
You will be able to continue forward eventually, I promise.
posted by
SomeoneElse
on May 14, 2008 at 7:37 AM
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This is a poignant piece, so reflective of the pain in loss. sam
posted by
sam444
on May 14, 2008 at 6:03 AM
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Very well expressed mourning
I feel a passion here; well done; thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on May 14, 2008 at 2:17 AM
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Very touching..
Your words stir up emotions softly! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on May 13, 2008 at 8:19 PM
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This just moves me to actual tears ~ this is a very poignant poem.
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 13, 2008 at 8:03 PM
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I can't even imagine the author's pain ... very beautifully and
movingly written. God bless and keep you.
posted by
VictoriaP
on May 13, 2008 at 6:05 PM
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Amazingly sweet and sad poem. Such pain comes through these lines that I would dare anyone that has an ounce of sensibility to read it and not weep. I am so sorry for your loss. BEliev
posted by
Sinome
on May 13, 2008 at 5:32 PM
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i'm sorry to hear that my dear...you wrote it with so much passion and sadness...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on May 13, 2008 at 5:09 PM
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such moving words
i'm deeply reached by your emotions
posted by
pelagus
on May 13, 2008 at 5:00 PM
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This poem was quite touching.
posted by
jmh256
on May 13, 2008 at 4:43 PM
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