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Excellent work. Thank you.
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 14, 2008 at 11:24 AM
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Excellent!
Love reading your posts! Give me more!
posted by
CRShelley
on May 14, 2008 at 10:18 AM
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... I think of Hart Crane's Brooklyn Bridge. In contrast to yours, he shares his vision of America. In your poem, the reader stands behind your eyes. You share the emotion from your heart and soul. It pours out over the metropolis. The reader shares your view of the busy maritime trade, the steel towers, and the busy city. All in all both Crane and you write about your visions of America. Excellent! ... 
posted by
BC-A
on May 14, 2008 at 8:54 AM
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