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unconditional love
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beautiful ageless love with no doubt only certainty regardless of behavior and attitude ... excellent! 
posted by
BC-A
on May 14, 2008 at 8:38 PM
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Fantastic Poem.
I love this. It reminds me of someone. Thank you for sharing.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on May 14, 2008 at 8:08 PM
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I like it.
I think I like it. With the suggestion abt re-phrasing it as "with alas...." I think something is a little off. I like the origional better or maybe "alas with..." instead of "with alas.." Just my opinion though.
posted by
safriyie
on May 14, 2008 at 2:55 PM
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Well done, With allas my faults, she loves me still. I know, it's a rip
off comment from a great poet who said, and I quote: "With all my faults, she loves me still." I had to pad this comment to meet the new rules. I wanted to say, "With allas my faults...etc."
posted by
scriber
on May 14, 2008 at 1:14 PM
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I love the way you have expressed yourself.
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 14, 2008 at 11:41 AM
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