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Outstanding! I was taken in immediately. Congratulations!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 16, 2008 at 4:20 PM
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another delicious description of feelings
coming from your heart 
posted by
pelagus
on May 16, 2008 at 2:25 PM
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Great write my friend. From my
to your
.
posted by
cmhnord
on May 16, 2008 at 10:05 AM
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wonderful work dear...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on May 15, 2008 at 10:19 PM
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Awesome work..You managed to get lots of twists that go into other images here..Well done!
posted by
Wigopa_
on May 15, 2008 at 8:39 PM
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Re:
that is the 2nd time that we have both been simultaneously been reading oneanothers work!!! really! i thank you for your astute comments:)
posted by
bumpsinaroad
on May 15, 2008 at 7:58 PM
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I liked this style, flowing verse with no stops to gather one's thoughts. It was like an aqvalanche of feelings, raw and unedited. I loved it.
PS... Vogue is a blonde?? I always pictured her brunette :-)
posted by
Sinome
on May 15, 2008 at 7:43 PM
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-thnks 4 the read
well-i can c how one can get "lost"-reading it-or other poetry for that matter. The whole reason i write is because i feel lost,confused (for lack of better words) and i somewhat relieve my inner pain this way. I can only write how it comes to me i guess-and to explain it-weell-that is complicated and hard. it is almost like disecting my life--in a way?? Then again-it depends on what the write is about. thnks for your opinion-or honesty:)
posted by
bumpsinaroad
on May 15, 2008 at 7:40 PM
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I am a little lost here, but then, I'm only a stupid blonde!
posted by
vogue
on May 15, 2008 at 2:23 PM
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You have used very good imagery.
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 15, 2008 at 12:32 PM
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