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For you make the dream seem real then you drop back and finish reality. Wow
posted by
Mystereo
on December 18, 2008 at 6:07 PM
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I do I do I do I do adoore you. leah the Discom
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on June 21, 2008 at 11:40 AM
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Pls believe me
Your words show desperateness and sorrow and helplessness all at once. But your spiritual side and discipline can win over the situation......this is what I believe and imply. Thanks for sharing.
posted by
aryaindia
on May 25, 2008 at 4:25 AM
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Discom dear
I read what you replied to pelagus. Wish you the best in the world. I miss you.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 22, 2008 at 10:36 PM
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Stunning!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 19, 2008 at 1:56 PM
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Thanks vickip :)
posted by
Discombobulated78
on May 18, 2008 at 10:58 PM
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Bhas
Yes, back in New Zealand and happy to be back. You might want to read my reply to pelagus.
posted by
Discombobulated78
on May 18, 2008 at 10:58 PM
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Bold and I love it!
And feel for the sadness too.
posted by
VictoriaP
on May 18, 2008 at 10:56 PM
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pelagus
Well for once it's not me being heartbroken, it's me having to break someone else's heart... and I don't want to.
posted by
Discombobulated78
on May 18, 2008 at 10:53 PM
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Hi Discom -
back in New Zealand? This poem is so boldly passionate and the yeaning, in between a big yes and a big ...No?
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 18, 2008 at 5:52 AM
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this is heartbreaking
i'm so sorry you have to go through such a desperate feeling 
posted by
pelagus
on May 18, 2008 at 5:44 AM
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Thanks to all :)
posted by
Discombobulated78
on May 17, 2008 at 7:16 AM
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Something happened on the way ...
Oh, I'm both touched and sorry, love.
posted by
BC-A
on May 17, 2008 at 5:53 AM
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Very nice, very well written.
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 17, 2008 at 5:24 AM
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Discombobulated ~.~
A nice write -- passionate, boldly honest. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understading.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on May 17, 2008 at 5:19 AM
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i believe you
I believe you do.
This was me speaking. You spoke for me.
this was beautiful. It was full. It was truthful, It was me, it was you....aaah, it was due.
It flowed smoothly like morning dew, it renewed like mountain dew...it was true, it was me, it was you.
- okay, I'll stop here, read more...I'm REXX D'Artist.
posted by
Rexx_D_Artist
on May 17, 2008 at 1:51 AM
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