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This is a very cool poem. I like the leading imagery and the sweet taste of reality at the end!  sam

posted by sam444 on May 18, 2008 at 9:05 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful poem, mystical almost, sweet, refreshingly simple and full of love. Good job!

posted by Sinome on May 17, 2008 at 9:48 PM | link to this | reply

I like being brought close to things, and you, whispering your intentions of how things are.

posted by jfm32 on May 17, 2008 at 12:44 PM | link to this | reply