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WORDS on- style- GETTING SOME!
Thank you readers/fellows!
I did try to shift gears a bit in style - glad you noticed- (I was trying to have some (style) to tell you the truth).
I was finding that the prose was "heavy with words", so, I did something new with the last few pieces after I let the "write" out of my soul- I tried to edit (for more than spelling).
The result may have been my new style- (who knows what readers will like).
You know you have style when readers in NY put you in print! (In my humble opinion -this is a sign you have some style or at least that the readers who read you have some).
QUESTION TO PONDER:
Do you think it is more sexy to see a woman 100% nude, or with some clothes on?
My thoughts are:
When I thought about this question, then applied it to the work, I felt I needed to take some clothing/words off the work, and put some other pieces/spaces in (leaving room for the imagination)- The result I got was a naked poem that has captured your attention! Glad you enjoyed the work.©
Tammie Anderson Coffey™
posted by
Harvardgirl_global
on May 25, 2008 at 8:44 AM
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Interesting write, keep sharing. From my
to your
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posted by
cmhnord
on May 21, 2008 at 5:34 PM
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Decision making is difficult. Unique style as well. sam
posted by
sam444
on May 20, 2008 at 2:10 PM
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Interesting style!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 20, 2008 at 9:59 AM
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