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Awww the sea and it's many passions..Loved it..
posted by
Wigopa_
on May 23, 2008 at 9:49 AM
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It's so unfortunate...
...that people confuse artifice for the real thing. Excellent philosophical perspective you always have on life...and I totally agree.
posted by
metalrat
on May 22, 2008 at 5:45 PM
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posted by
contagion_publishing
on May 21, 2008 at 9:17 PM
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Just awesome Sinome .... and true ...
closing their eyes and their ears they come back no more aware of the colors and joys of "life" when they come home. Truly a joy to read
posted by
VictoriaP
on May 21, 2008 at 8:26 PM
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"
that softly rush the soft sandy beach," -awesome stuff here!
posted by
NighthawkNY
on May 21, 2008 at 6:11 PM
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I long for the sun and I long for a glimpse of the sea. I'd better go and sit by the river!
posted by
Kabu
on May 21, 2008 at 11:53 AM
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To have return and yet be lost. Excellent imagery, I felt I was on a tour. sam
posted by
sam444
on May 21, 2008 at 11:33 AM
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And then they'll want a vacation to get over the "stress" of vacation...
u described well some, not all, of the people I know :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on May 21, 2008 at 9:59 AM
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They will know where they are,
but they will still be lost.
I love these lines
posted by
jmh256
on May 21, 2008 at 9:14 AM
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Thanks Sinome...
for speeding up summertime! This is packed with sun-filled energy~Fantastic!!!
posted by
Lyrico
on May 21, 2008 at 7:54 AM
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A day in the sun ~ your description here is so right on Marta --- and I could actually feel the sun crisping me ~ reminds me of a raisin the sun - a fruit ripening. This was so full of imagery and so much your wonderful, tender thoughtfulness ~ glad I came in to read a few minutes this morn
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 21, 2008 at 5:55 AM
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A timely reminder that summer is here........
having the sea on my doorstep does tend to make me rather take it for granted! An excellent read my dear Sinome; thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on May 21, 2008 at 3:23 AM
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Everyone needs a day in the sun now and then, even if the memory does not stay with them when they return to the hectic busy lives they lead.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 21, 2008 at 12:53 AM
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One of the best ways to vent my emotions is writing
posted by
contagion_publishing
on May 20, 2008 at 9:06 PM
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Sinome, my dear
The lover sees Helen’s beauty in an Ethiopian’s eyebrow. And that is just what you've seen in this fantastic description of Nature, and painted it for us who don't 
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 20, 2008 at 8:54 PM
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