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Simple lovely work! Great job!
posted by
Wigopa_
on May 22, 2008 at 11:30 PM
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mariaki, that was awesome...................
How are you, sweet lady? I'm coming around and should be fit in no time. Nice to read you again.
Maggie
posted by
MaggieMae
on May 22, 2008 at 6:20 PM
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hi its ladydew
what a great write and read! Rhyming splendid! ty ladydew
posted by
ladydew
on May 22, 2008 at 1:39 PM
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It is lovely, maria
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 22, 2008 at 1:31 PM
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This is absolutely Beautiful mariaki! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on May 22, 2008 at 1:23 PM
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This was so grand, the rhyme scheme provided for a superb cadence and the feeling of bliss was so wonderful! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 22, 2008 at 12:33 PM
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Very nice. Reading this poem gave me an intense feeling of bliss.
posted by
jmh256
on May 22, 2008 at 9:15 AM
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Maria - did u intend, in 6 lines form the end, that "Nothing con reverse"
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on May 22, 2008 at 8:03 AM
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I loved it...your rhythms are of love aflowing. SUGGESTION: my last line (
which is not even to be considered seriously in YOUR poem) would have carried the rhyme: "LOve on the Cross, our Loving Father sent." Apologies for not having yet replied to your wonderful email. Shalom and Namasthe
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on May 22, 2008 at 7:59 AM
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Maria ~.~
Beautiful! Great write...and read (sounds like a place I'd love to be). Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on May 22, 2008 at 7:39 AM
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