Go to Where the Hell is Heaven ?
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- Go to in a pool that seems so shallow
one more delicious time reading your words
posted by
pelagus
on May 26, 2008 at 12:06 PM
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~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 25, 2008 at 7:40 PM
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You can't say it better.Well done.
posted by
SeshuWho
on May 25, 2008 at 12:17 AM
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I loved how I could make this poem my very own. Just grand my friend! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 23, 2008 at 12:31 PM
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twomany
Excellent theme for a poem -
a pool that seems so shallow (and not realizing its depth, treading water, and so on). I so enjoy this poem a
nd your rhythm (which, when constructing a rhyming poem, can be a challenge) was bang on.
posted by
Troosha
on May 23, 2008 at 7:46 AM
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