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I often thought of this. In fact, ties have caused deaths on the assembly line!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 23, 2008 at 8:52 PM
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This is a great one. A noose around the neck was too precious! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 23, 2008 at 2:24 PM
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not too tight ...
around the collar, love. You need your breath to breathe these clever lines!
posted by
BC-A
on May 23, 2008 at 4:34 AM
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