Go to Talia's Poetry
- Add a comment
- Go to Any day now expecting twins!...
Too cool...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 27, 2008 at 11:27 PM
| link to this | reply
Lovely
I know for some people it sometimes can be difficult if their lover is not their best friend too
...thank you for visiting and commenting on my blog
posted by
Color_Your_Life
on May 27, 2008 at 1:49 PM
| link to this | reply
I've been trying to catch up...
On your previous work!
Talia
posted by
versatalia
on May 27, 2008 at 12:29 PM
| link to this | reply
I'm glad you dig my writing style, I dig yours
posted by
contagion_publishing
on May 27, 2008 at 3:24 AM
| link to this | reply
So, no twins? Never mind, a love poem which is not a sad one is very much appreciated.
posted by
vogue
on May 27, 2008 at 3:23 AM
| link to this | reply
hello? I'm waiting on more ....
whatcha got?? Sweet dreams Talia!
posted by
VictoriaP
on May 26, 2008 at 11:37 PM
| link to this | reply
'm sorry to disappoint...I
I wrote it from first person point of view! It's amazing how supportive everyone is. I would never want to decieve anyone, but I'm just using my creative mind. Thank you so much. Your comments touch me because it shows what true "human beings" and what a "big heart" you all have. Thank you, I'm so touched! - Talia
posted by
versatalia
on May 26, 2008 at 10:58 PM
| link to this | reply
Talia ~
~ you're going to have 'twins?' I'm blown away ~ wow...I'm too excited for you --- I'm just filled with awe and joy and ohhh...So wonderful Angel ~
~ and touching poem to boot!!~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 26, 2008 at 8:58 PM
| link to this | reply
congrats on the twins, this is very nice
posted by
Lanetay
on May 26, 2008 at 7:24 PM
| link to this | reply
I appreciate everyone's feedback!
This really is a great site!
Talia
posted by
versatalia
on May 26, 2008 at 1:36 PM
| link to this | reply
Beautiful words
from the heart
posted by
Rach0602
on May 26, 2008 at 11:10 AM
| link to this | reply
Talia
Wonderful "story" - the reality of the twists and turns of your 12 years and now yet another phase to come in your life with your best friend.
posted by
Troosha
on May 26, 2008 at 8:05 AM
| link to this | reply
Lovely!!!!
Lovely thoughts from a lovely heart!!
enjoyed reading
regards
geekunnel
posted by
geekunnel
on May 26, 2008 at 7:27 AM
| link to this | reply
This is a charming prose poem!
posted by
The_Lost_Dutchman
on May 26, 2008 at 5:57 AM
| link to this | reply
Be careful...
...writing hypothetical pieces. I've done that and readers will assume you're speaking about yourself.
Just wanted to give you that 'heads-up' since you're new to blogit.
Welcome aboard and it seems you've hit the ground running with some very impressive work.
Thank you, for visiting my blog and for your kind comments.
posted by
metalrat
on May 26, 2008 at 5:17 AM
| link to this | reply
Thanks for your comment!
Your work is beautiful as well!
posted by
versatalia
on May 26, 2008 at 12:37 AM
| link to this | reply
expecting.....
There is beauty in your words as there is in your soul. You are elevated in spirit. Thanks for sharing.
posted by
aryaindia
on May 26, 2008 at 12:30 AM
| link to this | reply
The memories are mine...
but I'm not actually expecting. I'm hoping your friends can complete the story, and thought they might enjoy it. Thanks for reading it and for your feedback. You're an awesome writer! Talia
posted by
versatalia
on May 26, 2008 at 12:03 AM
| link to this | reply
oh wow .... this gave me chills! What a wonderful
relationship you have ... and the memories, wow. Your babies will be very calm and content ... same as their momma when she was pregnant! I love this
posted by
VictoriaP
on May 25, 2008 at 11:37 PM
| link to this | reply
Talia ~.~
...a beautiful thing -- lasting love; and now the fruits of that love. Wonderful write.! Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on May 25, 2008 at 11:17 PM
| link to this | reply