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great poem ... I love the way it flows and the irony at the end.
posted by
VictoriaP
on May 26, 2008 at 7:26 PM
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like how this moves almost seemlessly, pivoting with, "words that never lie/ wish you hadn't said" into second part, mirroring what was never said--because there is no first part. Not sure what I just said,
but that's what I like about this poem.
John
posted by
jfm32
on May 26, 2008 at 7:21 PM
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star_childe ~.~
Such beauty -- as a prayer. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on May 26, 2008 at 2:21 PM
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star_childe ~.~
Such beauty -- as a prayer. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on May 26, 2008 at 2:21 PM
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I want to partake in this lesson too! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 26, 2008 at 12:34 PM
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Divinity requires perfection
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 26, 2008 at 11:54 AM
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