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I enjoyed this very much!
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 4, 2008 at 2:07 PM
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Si! Amigo!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on June 4, 2008 at 10:45 AM
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Excellent in your repetoire, I enjoyed this piece immensely. Arya from India
posted by
aryaindia
on June 4, 2008 at 1:51 AM
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posted by
contagion_publishing
on June 3, 2008 at 11:19 PM
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I did enjoy this, Talia
Thanks for sharing. Thanks for the visit to my blog and your comments.
I appreciate you.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on June 3, 2008 at 8:34 AM
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Maybe I should have put...
the explanation after the poem!
Talia
posted by
versatalia
on June 3, 2008 at 1:14 AM
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Well, I read the above explanation before I read the poem. Now I'm wondering what I would have thought if I read just the poem. Who knows where my mind might have wandered?
posted by
TAPS.
on June 1, 2008 at 6:04 PM
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beautiful Talia
posted by
Star5_
on June 1, 2008 at 3:53 PM
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An ode to a pen indeed!
posted by
Straightforward
on June 1, 2008 at 3:11 AM
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--- really great ~ creative!!! Bravo
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 31, 2008 at 9:13 PM
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very different indeed
posted by
Lanetay
on May 31, 2008 at 8:02 PM
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Let me re-phrase...
I just re-read my comment and it didn't seem clear....I meant when I read your
blog title, I read it as "Oh, Sweet Fountain Pen" so when I saw your poem title "My Righthand Man" I automatically assumed you were talking about what you write with. So so strange!
posted by
NiteTide
on May 31, 2008 at 2:44 PM
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You might find this amusing...
but before I read this entry, when I saw the title, I read it as "Oh, Sweet Fountain
Pen." Strange, no? So, when I actually read your poem, it all clicked and made sense...and then I read the blurb right before it... explaining that it was a pen and I became so confused that I re-read your title and realized that I had misread it!
I have to agree with your poem because without my writing pen, I truly don't believe I would be here today to read everyone's wonderful writing. Without words, I would have lost to the world a long time ago.
posted by
NiteTide
on May 31, 2008 at 2:34 PM
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Well all I can say is thank goodness I read all the comments before I
gave my opinion on what I thought your were talking about ... whew! Oh ... what did I think it was?? Ummm ... well, ok ...
Well, there you go ... that is how deep I am (no pun intended) ...
Now that I know what you were referring to ... BRAVO, I love it!
posted by
VictoriaP
on May 31, 2008 at 2:34 PM
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I guess, I have also squeezed apen...ut it could not squeeze me back. Liked
the double entendre... I used to use my pen-name PUNSTAR and Punster. Nice to meet ya and read ya. Stop by soemtimes, won't U? Shalom/peace/amen
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on May 31, 2008 at 12:56 PM
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Interesting lifestyle!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 31, 2008 at 12:28 PM
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Well done I saw all your intentions! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 31, 2008 at 8:28 AM
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Great!
Bravo!.....to you for being you! Loved it!
posted by
CRShelley
on May 31, 2008 at 12:35 AM
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Soulspeaker...
There's not a shadow of doubt that you would have gotten this! I should have had more faith in you! I just thought it was strange, that out of all the people I asked, no one knew that I was talking about a pen! I guess most people just assume the obvious! Thank you so much for reading my work and commenting!
Talia
posted by
versatalia
on May 31, 2008 at 12:09 AM
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I appreciate the way you have expressed it
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 30, 2008 at 9:49 PM
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very clever ...
and I like your attitude as well, love.
posted by
BC-A
on May 30, 2008 at 7:52 PM
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Talia ~.~
Even if you hadn't hinted, I would have guessed a "pen." (believe it or not!) Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on May 30, 2008 at 7:06 PM
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