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As Olivia says...Wowee!
"courageous enough to face the fate"
I really loved that line...it's like the candle is sacrificing itself willingly for our joy and/or comfort.
J
posted by
Idyllwilde
on June 1, 2008 at 8:45 AM
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I burn candles all the time...they add ambiance, like your poem did!
posted by
Ariala
on June 1, 2008 at 7:38 AM
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Best regards to you and congratulations on a fine poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 1, 2008 at 6:22 AM
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I am a candle lover. They add so much ambiance to any situation. Good work.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 1, 2008 at 5:43 AM
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Aah ...
And when the light in your flame’s eyes last as well ... excellent
posted by
BC-A
on June 1, 2008 at 4:00 AM
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And now an ode to a candle! I just read an ode to a pen
posted by
Straightforward
on June 1, 2008 at 3:14 AM
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pretty feeling
posted by
pelagus
on June 1, 2008 at 3:10 AM
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