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Just like Jesus! Inspiration speaks for itself with great writers like you!
Solitar
posted by
mothernature
on June 6, 2008 at 7:08 AM
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Re: New Age Verse!
To God be the glory.
If only man would return to Him
for in Him lies much wisdom & knowledge.
Closing your eyes to the world
lets you see further, for HE watches for you
so why open your eyes?
posted by
Rexx_D_Artist
on June 6, 2008 at 12:41 AM
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New Age Verse!
I find that your writing serves as a ministry in the royal priesthood on subjects that nobody else touches. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Former pre-theological status student BC.
posted by
BC-A
on June 5, 2008 at 12:02 PM
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Aids spreading like rabies.
"Ladies with babies
Aids spreading like rabies
Handed to a kid in a box full of maybe's"
Very true but a very sad to see the countless number of lives being destoyed. nice piece of poetry. I loved it. A bit deep.. might have to read it again. keep writing. Sophie.
posted by
safriyie
on June 5, 2008 at 7:47 AM
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" Ladies with babies
Aids spreading like rabies
Handed to a kid in a box full of maybe's"
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posted by
safriyie
on June 5, 2008 at 7:43 AM
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breathtaking writtings
the rhythm is gorgeous!
posted by
pelagus
on June 4, 2008 at 1:57 AM
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I like this very much as well. sam
posted by
sam444
on June 2, 2008 at 8:40 AM
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It could well have been rap ........amazing work and well meant. Thanks for sharing.
posted by
aryaindia
on June 2, 2008 at 2:37 AM
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