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What wonderful work this is..Just simply excellent..I hope Shae and Stef are well...ANd you are feeling ok? Hugs..
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 8, 2008 at 10:55 PM
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Jen, please say Hello to Shae and Stef for me ~ what a blessing these 2 children of yours are --- I adore their precious comments and their adorable darling faces ~
~ Auntie Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 7, 2008 at 5:13 PM
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some things cant be fixed
posted by
Lanetay
on June 7, 2008 at 1:46 PM
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This is a great write. The analogy in the first stanza was incredibly superb. I love your poetry my dear daughter. I have been so tired I am sorry it took so long for me to catch up to you. I am reading in small sessions today. I should be caught so I can get to your work when it newly posted. I love you so much my daughter. And hello to my lovely Shae and my handsome Stef, Grandma loves you dearly. What are my kiddos up to this fine summer? All my love to my precious family. Shae you can come say hi at my blog anytime mom says it is okay and I will answer you at hers if that is okay with her too! Mom is a go-between. lol
posted by
sam444
on June 7, 2008 at 12:42 PM
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yay you did not go
This is very nice!
posted by
EmmaCunnan
on June 7, 2008 at 9:22 AM
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YOU SAID IT ALL WITH OUT AN ERROR, RIGHT??????
posted by
Star5_
on June 7, 2008 at 7:26 AM
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Powerful --- and passionate ~ welcome back Jen!!!
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 7, 2008 at 6:37 AM
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WOW! True Depth. Sometimes love is a battle.
Glad your back Purple Mermaid!
I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
P.S. I'll always remember my Pinoy Rock n roll friends!
posted by
yellowrose55
on June 6, 2008 at 9:41 PM
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Hello, the Purple. So, so, so very glad to see you back, my dear. Excellent poem, beautiful use of words, expressions, but at the moment I'm concerned about your welfare. How are you doing on the health front? Pls take full care, and how's Geff, Shae and Stef?
ya all.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on June 6, 2008 at 8:54 PM
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pieces of two people ...
pieced together in a piece that challenges the heart and soul in a sour relationship. lol
posted by
BC-A
on June 6, 2008 at 8:52 PM
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