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burn, love, burn ...
your poem sets emotion on fire!
posted by
BC-A
on June 21, 2008 at 8:20 PM
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hey
i am with you all the way on this one... i love my girlfriend so much and we have put so much into each other so i totally understand and agree, God bless you and your flame.. mine burns within me everyday..mike
posted by
meeks2
on June 12, 2008 at 9:13 PM
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Nice work!
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on June 10, 2008 at 6:01 PM
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Great poem. The repetition works very well and intensifies the strong feelings.
posted by
vogue
on June 9, 2008 at 1:54 AM
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Sounds like true love....
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 8, 2008 at 11:19 PM
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Great job Talia!
I enjoy your poetry so much.
posted by
VictoriaP
on June 8, 2008 at 9:41 PM
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Yes the repetition brings about the passion and the hope and desire --- the continual 'flame' ~ as life --- this touched me, very well written ~ (lyrical) ~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 8, 2008 at 8:56 PM
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I enjoyed the cadence and the imagery with its affirmative voice! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 7, 2008 at 4:45 PM
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Great poem, very passionate and intense. I know exactly what you meant, been there ... stay strong
posted by
Sinome
on June 7, 2008 at 3:52 PM
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What a FLAME!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on June 7, 2008 at 2:36 PM
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