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mneme
Thank you, young mneme; it even intrigues me.
posted by
johnmacnab
on June 15, 2008 at 4:52 AM
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johmnacnab, intriguing... :)
posted by
mneme
on June 12, 2008 at 4:22 PM
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Pat_B
I'm off to look for dolphin-shaped balloons, and inspiration.
posted by
johnmacnab
on June 12, 2008 at 6:17 AM
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Sira890
Sigh! OK, Sira, I'll start r-writing it - after I've cut the grass, fixed the back deck, cleaned the pool and, let me think....
posted by
johnmacnab
on June 12, 2008 at 6:12 AM
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cake? balloons?
Is there anything but chocolate? And in light of the story line, dolphin-shaped blue helium balloons. If you run out inspiration, you can sip a bit of helium from the balloon and amuse yourself by talking "chipmunk."
posted by
Pat_B
on June 10, 2008 at 3:17 PM
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Mac
I need to know what happens next. So you need to finish it. And if the plot evolves to the point that it demands a book instead of a short story, all the better!
Write, Mac!
posted by
Sira890
on June 10, 2008 at 9:27 AM
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Pat_B
Decisions, decisions, what kind of cake and what colour of balloons?
posted by
johnmacnab
on June 10, 2008 at 8:48 AM
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BC-A
I'll try, BC, I'll try.
posted by
johnmacnab
on June 10, 2008 at 8:46 AM
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Whacky
Would Bo read it, though, Whacky? I'm not going to finish it if my second favourite dog won't read it.
posted by
johnmacnab
on June 10, 2008 at 8:45 AM
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sam444
I am giving it serious consideration, sam.
posted by
johnmacnab
on June 10, 2008 at 8:43 AM
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Very interesting, but it's only the invitation to your party.
You know you've got much more to tell before your intrepid sailor triumphs over adversity or not. So blow up the balloons and bake the cake..
posted by
Pat_B
on June 10, 2008 at 5:22 AM
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keep writing ...
a fictional Survivor. I feel you, working on your scenic adventure.
posted by
BC-A
on June 10, 2008 at 5:02 AM
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Oh come on finish it!
A rose

and a smile

from me! =^. .^= Bo too!
posted by
Whacky
on June 9, 2008 at 8:11 PM
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I certainly hope you continue to develop this! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 9, 2008 at 1:39 PM
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