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And also the least we can do...
...is leave the world a better place than we found it in.
Powerful message, Jen.
posted by
metalrat
on June 10, 2008 at 2:49 PM
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S0 beautifully sad Jen... so heartbreaking... you shold be writing about happier things, letting your heart smile not cry... This is beautiful though, you have such a way with words...such a gift. Be well my friend, rest and smile
posted by
Sinome
on June 10, 2008 at 7:43 AM
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Very stirring and sad.
posted by
yellowrose55
on June 10, 2008 at 6:40 AM
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painful
and evocative. Excellent...
posted by
Loribeth215
on June 9, 2008 at 11:31 PM
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My heart is breaking. The images you have evoked within your words is one of the saddest things this world fails to see.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 9, 2008 at 11:02 PM
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Defenseless children of God .. where do they run to ..
A million dollar question indeed !You are a great thinker .
posted by
afzal50
on June 9, 2008 at 10:51 PM
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beautiful as you are!!!!!
posted by
Star5_
on June 9, 2008 at 9:37 PM
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What a powerful voice you have in this..Wonderful work..Very well written..
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 9, 2008 at 6:58 PM
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