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dark_moon can relate dark_mistress...moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on June 12, 2008 at 2:15 PM
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I hope there is a light
and that you find it soon. In the meantime, very moving.
posted by
malcolm
on June 12, 2008 at 10:26 AM
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Dark
Certainly sounds like a dark and difficult journey – but as your poem concludes “And yet here I am”.
posted by
Troosha
on June 12, 2008 at 8:56 AM
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posted by
contagion_publishing
on June 12, 2008 at 8:28 AM
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I liked it too. I do find the more I work on my poems, the better they get. For me the real writing comes after the initial poem is put together. sam
posted by
sam444
on June 12, 2008 at 2:49 AM
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Came looking here because of your comment...
... and found great poetry!... Strong, powerful imagery! Love it!
posted by
The_Lost_Dutchman
on June 12, 2008 at 2:07 AM
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Very deeply written!
I will alway's believe when something is written with such deepness it's never to long!
posted by
tyleness
on June 11, 2008 at 11:15 PM
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No dear not too long and I pray that by writing your terrible times like
this, one day they will all leave and the beautiful you will be what remains.
posted by
Kabu
on June 11, 2008 at 9:29 PM
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Don't ever edit your poetry...
because it's fascinating and dark and beautiful.
Loved it.
posted by
tinkerbitch
on June 11, 2008 at 9:28 PM
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that is really deep
posted by
Lanetay
on June 11, 2008 at 8:21 PM
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Very, very good writing!
Keep up the good work.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on June 11, 2008 at 8:13 PM
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The length was fine. I think the title justifies its length, so you have nothing to worry about. This poem was amazing, eliciting in me feelings of frustration, anger, hate, lust, past love, and realization. It was a beautiful structure of words. Bravo!
posted by
NiteTide
on June 11, 2008 at 6:45 PM
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