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Your imagery has such great depth! The undertones of reality startle me in a most pleasant way.
I am so sorry the Lakers did not get the trophy. Much love to you, sam
posted by
sam444
on June 18, 2008 at 11:12 AM
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lestate
Maybe we can make some changes on
this side of reality. Interesting piece!!!!!
posted by
Troosha
on June 18, 2008 at 8:17 AM
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Passion!~ You exclaim your poetry with passion!! and I like this about you Lestate~ write on!~ I love this poem. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 17, 2008 at 8:14 PM
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As philosopher and mystic, I agree with your propositions here... As a poet, I am not sure about the use of the exclamation marks. They throw off the flow of natural emphasis. But that may just be the difference between my poetry-making and yours.
posted by
Ciel
on June 17, 2008 at 7:27 PM
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