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there were very few who could read emotions from a musician. You made me teary-eyed!
posted by
BigD81
on June 22, 2008 at 7:40 AM
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Very well composed! Took me to the core of his heart!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on June 19, 2008 at 7:08 PM
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It's funny how a moment in time can become frozen in your mind ...
so much so that no matter how many times you replay it, the emotions are still there as intense as ever. This is a wonderful piece sinome ... one of your best, in my opinion
Sigh.
posted by
VictoriaP
on June 19, 2008 at 12:05 PM
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I don't know how you do it...
...makes me just want to shut down my computer and take up basket weaving or peeling potatoes.
This was truly a transcendental experience.
Thank you, Sinome, for sharing such a beautiful vision.
posted by
metalrat
on June 19, 2008 at 6:01 AM
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So moving, haunting, the imagery and the passion draw you in; "I was there".
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 19, 2008 at 2:09 AM
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Sinome
You have that rare ability, that rare artistic beauty with the felicity of words that can magically transport your reader to where you wish to lead them. Another wowzer for a deeply touching poem. Very good work indeed!
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on June 18, 2008 at 10:49 PM
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A great opening line...
... pulls you into the poem! Love it!
posted by
The_Lost_Dutchman
on June 18, 2008 at 1:35 PM
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Wow! So nice to get lost in glorious imagery. We connect, we love deep and profound imagery! Thank you for your endearing comments on
The Four Portals. It truly felt great to put it to rest. sam
posted by
sam444
on June 18, 2008 at 12:24 PM
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Passionate and profound !
posted by
afzal50
on June 18, 2008 at 8:23 AM
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Sinome
What a moment! What a poem! What a visual! And what delicate description of a man caught in his sorrow.....
This was an absolute delight to read. You took me into that moment.
posted by
Troosha
on June 18, 2008 at 7:35 AM
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Wow!
So wonderfully done!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on June 18, 2008 at 6:40 AM
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Ah ~ what a soulful poem here --- deep and yes, haunting. Such a pleasing melody. Touching ~
~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 18, 2008 at 6:34 AM
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Such a hauntingly beautiful story of undying love Sinome!
some exquisite lines here; excellent my friend; thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on June 18, 2008 at 3:59 AM
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Sinome ~.~
This is beautiful, breathtaking -- such a wonderful piece. My heart felt each line. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on June 18, 2008 at 3:44 AM
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My heart tore at this piece. Did you use the word heart "braking" on purpose? I actually really like that line, but I wasn't sure if it was done on purpose or not? This is too saddening yet beautiful.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 18, 2008 at 12:17 AM
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posted by
vogue
on June 18, 2008 at 12:03 AM
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What a beautiful piece! You are a magnificent writer of poetry! This is true poetry when the words just flow off your tongue. That is poetry. Bravo, my friend! Bravo!!!!!!!
posted by
Nataluna
on June 17, 2008 at 10:46 PM
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