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You are fluent in the language of emotion
Somehow I think each window of poems you write is only a small piece of the puzzle. You leave readers in contemplation, which is where they want to be.
posted by
Kobriel
on June 20, 2008 at 10:18 AM
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All I know for getting out of such a mood is to make sure you aren't
addicted to something, like menthol, for instance. Menthol addiction, however, is easy to cope with (take a Halls cough drop) and cure (gradually cut down, then stop). I hope it is that simple. I have to stick to the non-mentholated, Vitamin C Halls drops....
posted by
WindTapper
on June 20, 2008 at 5:04 AM
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sometimes it helps if we dont question life dear...or make it harder than it is...but i do share your sentiments on occasions dear...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on June 19, 2008 at 10:06 PM
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Interesting word substitution! The answer must be worked out within!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on June 19, 2008 at 6:37 PM
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Questions, Questions, Questions....
keep asking you will find the answers. Sometimes the answers are even in the questions. All the best in your quest. Beautiful poem. I love this philosophical poem. Sophie
posted by
safriyie
on June 19, 2008 at 3:29 PM
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I think this grand imagery too! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 19, 2008 at 9:57 AM
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great!!!! great!!
enjoyed reading......!!!
posted by
geekunnel
on June 19, 2008 at 6:47 AM
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Superb piece!
very well done; thanks for sharing and take care
posted by
mariaki
on June 19, 2008 at 3:33 AM
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You write so beyond your young years. This is so good ... and very
poignant. Please keep writing, you are a pleasure to read. Hope you had a good day ...
posted by
VictoriaP
on June 18, 2008 at 8:02 PM
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