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posted by
lyknliken
on July 16, 2008 at 10:31 PM
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This is stunning Diana... very expressive and moving. You captured well the feeling of emptiness one gets when a love that meant everything is gone. I remember once looking at a phone and thinking it was obsolete, cuz I could not call him. I could not conceive using it to call anyone else at that moment...there was no one else... and in your talking about the ocean you captured that feeling of quiet dispair... Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on June 23, 2008 at 10:18 PM
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Beautiful poem and stunning picture ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 23, 2008 at 2:40 PM
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I was going to quote the last line (as Souspeaker did) because it created a beautiful ending....
posted by
Troosha
on June 23, 2008 at 11:24 AM
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Superb little poem !
posted by
afzal50
on June 23, 2008 at 5:05 AM
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Dianna ~.~
Very nicely expressed...very nicely written. --"...no where to fall but to drown in you." Nice line. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on June 23, 2008 at 12:59 AM
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