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Nice write...nice read. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on June 23, 2008 at 3:56 PM
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This is full of undertones of gray and sadness! Beautiful. I am curious about one line, your first one: "The night falls as if slain by the sun" -- wouldn't that mean that the sun had killed night, meaning daylight rules the land instead of night? Perhaps I read the poem wrong and it takes its place in daylight? I will read again....
posted by
NiteTide
on June 23, 2008 at 1:49 PM
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Did I comment on this before? Great work!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on June 23, 2008 at 1:44 PM
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