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Thanks NiteTide... wow, I actually don't know what to say... you have made me blush!
and yes... it is a true request, so I'm thanking you for your support to
posted by
lionreign
on June 26, 2008 at 7:56 AM
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Re: Lion
thanks Troosha... I hope it's universally that effective
posted by
lionreign
on June 26, 2008 at 7:54 AM
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Re: Wonderful!
Thanks Kayzzaman
posted by
lionreign
on June 26, 2008 at 7:53 AM
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I'm with Troosha on that. I've always heard "the sun in her eyes" but never sunlight. You added a dimension that transcended my thoughts and I was, for lack of words, blown away. The pure need in the poem is acutely felt within each line, and the repetition only enhances the yearning that I see in this poem. But at the same time, even though a heart must break for the poem's end and beginning to occur, I am rooting the speaker on like an ecstatic fan, knowing that when it comes to true love, hearts generally must break for it to occur. This was just beautiful, and if this is a true request of the heart, how could she not fall in love with you?
posted by
NiteTide
on June 25, 2008 at 3:46 PM
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Lion
"The sunlight of your eyes" - now if someone said that to me.. I'd melt.
posted by
Troosha
on June 25, 2008 at 1:13 PM
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Wonderful!
posted by
Kayzzaman
on June 25, 2008 at 5:04 AM
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