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Hello my son!!!!! I was missing you and so I stopped in and treated myself to several of your fine poems. They are so fresh and rich, I just fall in the imagery and am enlightened as a result. I feel our connection from your own words: I write to breathe I love you so! 
Shelly
posted by
sam444
on June 30, 2008 at 1:22 PM
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!!!
posted by
Sinome
on June 27, 2008 at 9:47 PM
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I could feel the essence of Hughes, but it is all your distinctive flair. I think there is an artist dying to emerge! Love to you, Shelly
posted by
sam444
on June 27, 2008 at 11:33 AM
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"screen", I meant
posted by
Troosha
on June 27, 2008 at 9:24 AM
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Whoa - that had be glued to the sceen!!!!
posted by
Troosha
on June 27, 2008 at 9:24 AM
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Powerful Lestate ~ write on!!!! Fresh to the max!~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 27, 2008 at 5:46 AM
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Very well written, I love it
posted by
Kayzzaman
on June 27, 2008 at 4:38 AM
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cool ...
urban poetry could be the spoken word ... could be that it reminds me of the lyrics of a 60s Temptations song but in today's urban style ... but definitely clever with a brillant comparison of I guess slaves pickin' cotton to the urban motif ... and finally I think it's a sad love poem like a Temptations' song!
posted by
BC-A
on June 27, 2008 at 3:49 AM
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