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I reiterate, you are a 'dear' friend...as this tribute must touch the heart of the intended. This is beautiful, sad and moving but...I do feel 'hope' from your lovely lines. ~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 1, 2008 at 3:46 PM
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yes Troosha...it is sad... Thank you.
posted by
Sinome
on June 29, 2008 at 9:19 PM
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Thank you 101... unfortunately that is the way it goes...it will ad to their baggage and whoever comes after will have to deal with it . Thank you for commenting
posted by
Sinome
on June 29, 2008 at 9:18 PM
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You are right Lustor...that is why this friend of mine is so special :-)
posted by
Sinome
on June 29, 2008 at 9:17 PM
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Re: Love never dies..it only hybernates :)! - Ash
Cute Ash :-) thank you so much.
posted by
Sinome
on June 29, 2008 at 9:16 PM
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Re: Amen to love.
Amen indeed, but endings can be painful.
posted by
Sinome
on June 29, 2008 at 9:15 PM
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Re: Simone
Thank you so much Nautikos...
posted by
Sinome
on June 29, 2008 at 9:14 PM
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Simone
The end of a relationship is always painful, but it can also lead to a new beginning...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 29, 2008 at 7:52 PM
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Amen to love.
It lives forever!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on June 29, 2008 at 6:43 PM
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Love never dies..it only hybernates :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on June 29, 2008 at 1:54 PM
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a man that feels pain is rare
posted by
Lanetay
on June 29, 2008 at 10:02 AM
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This is prevalent in Western society. The next guy and girl will have the burdens of this love- gone- cold to shoulder! Very good snapshot of reality!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on June 29, 2008 at 8:39 AM
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It's so very sad when this happens....
posted by
Troosha
on June 29, 2008 at 8:07 AM
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...love and pain are siamese twins with love also being the balm..
posted by
magic_moon
on June 29, 2008 at 3:28 AM
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I just loved this tribute...Bravo Sinome...I found this so touching...with so much heart..I so enjoyed it..Thank you for sharing...
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 28, 2008 at 11:27 PM
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oh my sinome.....
posted by
Star5_
on June 28, 2008 at 9:34 PM
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beautiful. nice way to bring some hope into a sad story.
posted by
RomaKay
on June 28, 2008 at 3:37 PM
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A very beautiful word gift! It will be magical when it happens again. sam
posted by
sam444
on June 28, 2008 at 3:30 PM
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well, just beautiful..
sorry for the pain for i know it sucks hard but you did great on this poem...mike
posted by
meeks2
on June 28, 2008 at 3:29 PM
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*sigh* it is hard to help those who do not want to see the light at the end. But we stay strong for them, in hopes that they will stand again.

Wonderful poem, as always!!
posted by
NiteTide
on June 28, 2008 at 12:56 PM
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Sad one,,,very well written, my friend...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on June 28, 2008 at 11:58 AM
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so sad sinome .. my heart is with your friend. The emotianal pain
can be so overwhelming when it's over - only time will heal the wounds. Beautifully written, as always
posted by
VictoriaP
on June 28, 2008 at 11:40 AM
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