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I'm blushing...
Seriously, guys. yellowrose55, RomaKay, kingclay, Sinome, soulspeaker, sam444 and everyone else who took the time to read it, thank you all so much for the compliments and encouragement! I hope you continue to enjoy my occasional writings. My next, Damage Tone, is nearly complete and will be posted soon. - Chris
posted by
Marineair
on June 29, 2008 at 4:28 AM
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Most excellent work! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 29, 2008 at 4:25 AM
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Chris ~.~
Fantastic write! -- thought-provoking, poignant. Thanks so much for sharing, Poet. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on June 29, 2008 at 2:27 AM
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Very interesting to see your thought process at work through the different versions of this poem. We all do that you know. We write and then revise and revise, never satisfied with the product and always seing new ways to improve what we are trying to say. This one version seems very good to me, I like it, thought provoking and poignant. But I know that only you can decide if this is the final cut. Good work here and great read Christopher
posted by
Sinome
on June 28, 2008 at 9:19 PM
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Wow, wow is all I can say! Wow, took my breath away!
posted by
kingclay
on June 28, 2008 at 8:45 PM
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wow. fascinating, and thought provoking! great job!
posted by
RomaKay
on June 28, 2008 at 8:25 PM
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Looks like I've jumped in on the finale. A great mind catcher/eye opener for sure. I love it.
Guess I'd better start with number one.
posted by
yellowrose55
on June 28, 2008 at 7:07 PM
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