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Re: I have healed so much!
But bieng with someone for over half your life is easier to say, get over it and move on than to truly be able to do so, with the pain in my childrens eyes and the loss of their mother, who not only has abandened I, but has also abandened them, for another family! In my mind, this is pretty sick and the pain in the soul through this, is very slow going. thank you for caring!!
posted by
kingclay
on July 3, 2008 at 5:36 PM
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You got me at the end...
...I really liked this poem and especially the unexpected ending. I look forward to reading more of your work and invite you to have a look at my 'letters to a celeb...' blog if you would like to. You are always welcome. Holly.x
posted by
HollyBird
on June 30, 2008 at 1:28 PM
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Well
Such is life. i liked the way it started off as a story of love then it transformed into a controlled disaster. Nice job.
posted by
Shimp
on June 29, 2008 at 2:39 PM
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Ouch! Mine ended as well, there is life after marriage. So much good tidings to you! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 29, 2008 at 5:21 AM
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Clay ~.~
It's sad when a relationship goes wrong after so many years together -- through young love, children, struggles; but life continues...and so must we...continue to grow. Great poem! Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on June 29, 2008 at 12:53 AM
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Very nice
Thanks for sharing, Clay.
Good luck with everything...
posted by
Marineair
on June 28, 2008 at 9:13 PM
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how often the case ...
after, experiencing empty nest syndrome. I hope that blogging cheers you up, love.
posted by
BC-A
on June 28, 2008 at 9:09 PM
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Beautiful poem Clay..and yes...well... she did cross the line and its changed the dinamics of the relationship but hey, that is life and you got to get on with it. Either forgive and forget or forgive and get back with her. Life is out there waiting for you... people grow in different directions... Here is to hoping you can get passed this.
posted by
Sinome
on June 28, 2008 at 9:04 PM
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posted by
RomaKay
on June 28, 2008 at 8:22 PM
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