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The imagery is powerful ~ the voice is tender and touching, 'sad' ~~~ poignant Simone.
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 1, 2008 at 3:48 PM
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Man O man you can create outstanding imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 30, 2008 at 2:10 PM
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I meant "could"
posted by
Troosha
on June 30, 2008 at 8:37 AM
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I cold feel the sadness - the emptiness.....
posted by
Troosha
on June 30, 2008 at 8:37 AM
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you say things in my language, but better
posted by
Lanetay
on June 30, 2008 at 5:52 AM
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So beautiful albeit so very sad..............
it's amazing how many times a heart can break and be made whole again; thank you my friend and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on June 30, 2008 at 4:58 AM
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Thankyou for posting this amazing poem...
...I was really moved by your work. I look forward to reading lots morein the future. Holly.x
posted by
HollyBird
on June 30, 2008 at 3:39 AM
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...so very sad...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on June 29, 2008 at 11:24 PM
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Superbly crafted...a haunting narrative, my friend...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on June 29, 2008 at 9:56 PM
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Poignant and so touching, but know that my dear Marta is a beautiful shimmering light.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on June 29, 2008 at 9:29 PM
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wow
posted by
Star5_
on June 29, 2008 at 8:57 PM
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This kills my heart. It is so heart-breakingly sad. Reason for all the pain written on here, dearest?
posted by
NiteTide
on June 29, 2008 at 8:50 PM
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wow
posted by
Star5_
on June 29, 2008 at 8:47 PM
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