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Sometimes we have to convince ourselves first before we can move forward. I liked this poem very much! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 1, 2008 at 9:50 AM
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NO
Not conflict, her acting innocent was sexy
posted by
Shimp
on July 1, 2008 at 9:33 AM
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With friends like that ...
who needs enemies? Conflict is sexy
posted by
BC-A
on June 30, 2008 at 7:15 PM
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when the right time comes my dear...confusion will clear on its own. We just have to keep hoping and believing. Truth really hurts much more than lies. You have expressed this wholeheartedly my dear.

posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on June 30, 2008 at 5:55 PM
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What a fab piece of writing.
What a thought provoking piece of writing I really enjoyed it and I look forward to reading lots more of your work in the future and hopefully to welcoming you to my own blog. I love this kind of honest minimal writng that really hits the nail on the head, I wish I could do what you do. Thanks for sharing. Holly.x
posted by
HollyBird
on June 30, 2008 at 4:52 PM
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heart healier! Truth is what truth is!
even though it hurts like hell 99% of the time!!!
posted by
kingclay
on June 30, 2008 at 3:17 PM
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