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Sinome!! I was wondering if I may use this poem as one of the examples on my "different forms of Poetry" post? Pleeeeeease??
posted by
NiteTide
on July 4, 2008 at 8:59 AM
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...there is just no telling what kind of crazyness nite tide will inspire..
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posted by
magic_moon
on July 2, 2008 at 3:09 AM
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wow......you both are amazing!!!!!!!
posted by
Star5_
on July 2, 2008 at 1:59 AM
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and your inspiration didnt fail you my dear one..you sure came up with such an amazing work of art and a wonderful composition here! Bravo!!!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on July 1, 2008 at 9:37 PM
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Not bad reading for an hourglass! Unselfish action! Great!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 1, 2008 at 8:37 PM
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I like the shape of an hourglass, as time...I like this poem as well, of course...So touching!!! Tugs at my heart. Such a precious pearl of a prayer. ~ Sinome, write on!!!~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 1, 2008 at 3:51 PM
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Well done, Sinome!
You pulled-it-off on the shape and wrote astounding verse at the same time.
The content didn't suffer at all.
posted by
metalrat
on July 1, 2008 at 3:47 PM
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OoooooOoooh, this was WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You even got rhyming going on!! WOWOWWOWOWOWOWOWOW! You rock, Sinome!!!!! You WAY rock!
I mucho
u!!!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 1, 2008 at 2:41 PM
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posted by
lestate7
on July 1, 2008 at 2:18 PM
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He hears you, my friend...patience is sometimes so hard...
fantastic writing, Sinome...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 1, 2008 at 12:59 PM
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