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I can see also from the comments what I wanted to say. You have a way of taking people on board your poetic ship. A
for my delta home from my sandy one.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on July 11, 2008 at 5:54 AM
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Re: Kabu
yes from her shell she does emerge..Thank you for the neat comment..
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 8, 2008 at 11:57 PM
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Re: Purple_Mermaid11
Thank you Jen!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 8, 2008 at 11:53 PM
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Re: Soul_Builder101
Scifi channel does come up with some great movies some times..Don't they..Glad you enjoyed..Thank you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 8, 2008 at 11:52 PM
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Re: Sam444
You honor me Sam..Thank you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 8, 2008 at 11:43 PM
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Re: OnRain
Thank you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 8, 2008 at 11:40 PM
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Re: Ash
So glad you enjoyed..Thank you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 8, 2008 at 11:39 PM
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Re:Troosha
Thank you soo much for the splendid comments..They warm my heart coming from such a great writer..
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 8, 2008 at 11:35 PM
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Re: Dark_Moon
I think you might enjoy the new Sci fi that is out there..
..Thanks for the great comments..
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 8, 2008 at 11:33 PM
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Re: Afzal50
Thank you! Thanks for dropping by..Great to see you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 8, 2008 at 11:30 PM
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Re: Angesom_AG
As does art for me..Thank you! I get the next round of
for you..
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 8, 2008 at 11:28 PM
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Re: Shams-i-Heartsong
Thank you..Great to see you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 8, 2008 at 11:23 PM
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Re: Mariaki
Thank you soo much for the great comments..So glad you enjoyed it..
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 8, 2008 at 11:20 PM
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Re: NiteTide
Hey if you want to run..Ill go with you..I am always game for that..LOL..Keri Arthur's latest book in the Riley Jenson series..Thanks for the great comments!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 8, 2008 at 11:19 PM
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Re: Elyse
You are so right..It could either be the shape shifter or me coming home to go outside to play with Cushla..(Though with this in escapeable smoke we don't do much these days other then just look at each other..LOL) No worries take your time..I will stall it a couple more days if you need..(the story)Love to you
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 8, 2008 at 11:12 PM
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Re: Cheugon
Yep, shape shifter..mostly a were..Any thing by Charlene Harris(Southern Vamp Novels) or the latest series Keri Arthur (Riley Jensen Novels~I was reading the latest one of these..When I wrote this one..Finished it this morning..) Thanks for stopping in
Great to see you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 8, 2008 at 10:57 PM
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Re: Sinome
Thank you soo much...I am so glad that you enjoyed it..When I first penned it I wasn't sure if it was going to go into "that" pile which just seemed a little creepy..But, my dad said hey give it a shot and see what they say..Thank you for the great comments..
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 8, 2008 at 10:51 PM
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and so a butterfly is born
posted by
Kabu
on July 8, 2008 at 7:42 PM
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gorgeous piece my dearest one...just gorgeous!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on July 8, 2008 at 5:50 PM
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Saw something like this on Scifi a while ago. A female couldn't resist the male of her species, despite having controllers. Yet, she did! Wonderful movie that!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 8, 2008 at 3:21 PM
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Simply wonderful! I found this to be very compelling for me:
Releasing
what could never
be tamed..
I am going to do that one day! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 8, 2008 at 11:18 AM
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wow.wow...wow!!!!!!
posted by
Star5_
on July 8, 2008 at 11:07 AM
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Wildly engaging! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on July 8, 2008 at 11:00 AM
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Wigopa
I was completely engaged as I read this. Whatever you're inspiration (although I wouldn't have guessed Sci Fi) it was great!
posted by
Troosha
on July 8, 2008 at 8:11 AM
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...hmmm...you're just about to convince me to pick up sci fi again...moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on July 8, 2008 at 5:54 AM
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Poignant and powerful !
posted by
afzal50
on July 8, 2008 at 4:58 AM
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Art makes me feel good when it makes such sense.
posted by
Angesom_AG
on July 8, 2008 at 4:40 AM
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very nice ... thank you
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on July 8, 2008 at 4:03 AM
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Excellent piece my dear!
very powerful imagery and sense of urgency within; thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on July 8, 2008 at 2:57 AM
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Shape shifter huh?? I wanna know what you're reading!! I need myself a good summer read! Honestly though, more than just a shapeshifter, I found a more base of wild freedom in this poem that called to me. I thought it was just.....invigorating!! I wanted to run too!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 8, 2008 at 12:46 AM
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Marion/Wigopa~ I thought this was of a shape shifter...I felt it from the beginning (and I also thought it was of you, coming home from work --- taking off the work garb to go ride your horse ~
--- of course then I read on further) --- I love this poetry ~ so thrilling and adventuresome. Elyse
nite ~ *will catch up soon on the story...I am so behind and miss reading. Write on!~
posted by
elysianfields
on July 7, 2008 at 10:46 PM
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Hmmm??
Shape shifter?
I haven't read good sci-fi in a while.
Watcha readin'?
posted by
metalrat
on July 7, 2008 at 10:45 PM
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Wow Marion...this is so raw...feels so real... Is like if the inner beast...the true animal in that being had been released from the binding restraints of the man made coverings... I was there through your words... witnessing it... Amazing writing my friend... Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on July 7, 2008 at 10:07 PM
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