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Let It Go
Ah Sinonme, you are a tender heart
moving into the storms of life
may peace be your centre always
As you move ever onward.
Good write, merkie
posted by
merkie
on July 13, 2008 at 9:23 AM
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Amen sistah! This is so true .... so, so true. Perfect!
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 8, 2008 at 8:27 PM
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oh dearest sinome...you are so generous at heart and i adore you so much...this speaks to me too my love...and just how inspiring you are as always. Bless your heart my beloved one.
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on July 8, 2008 at 5:55 PM
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Hope I am not the one cited in your last few lines. But, this was great reading!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 8, 2008 at 2:53 PM
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Sinome
The old adage of "set it free..." is so very true and you have captured with your usual elegance in this poem.
posted by
Troosha
on July 8, 2008 at 12:11 PM
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Oh my dear fantabulous Marta, your Desert Prince will give you something in your honor tomorrow, for his inspiration. The wet ocean kissed sands needs a
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on July 8, 2008 at 11:45 AM
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Prego - moto bene
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 8, 2008 at 11:31 AM
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..yes, the key is to go into the fear, the emotion, the feeling, find out its lesson for you, move through it...too many never embrace their darkness because of fear and thus never learn the secrets that it holds for you...then other get stuck in the darkness, the fear, the pain, the negative emotions, forget to move through to the light, love waiting on the other side...it's not an intellectual exercise...you have to DO it...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on July 8, 2008 at 6:55 AM
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posted by
shamasehar
on July 8, 2008 at 4:56 AM
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Beautiful words .. arranged beautifully .. lift me up!
posted by
Angesom_AG
on July 8, 2008 at 4:36 AM
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Ah, I hope the friend has listened. One of the hardest things to do is to let go of real emotions...well...not for some...there are those who let go TOO much, but I always feel it is worrisome when none is really shown. This poem was beautifully written!!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 8, 2008 at 12:42 AM
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Wonderful poem my dear!! Thanks for your comment and for sharing and understanding my fantasy. Scuba diving ıs something I haven't trıed yet but, one day will. Take care of my Mıamı untıl I can come back. Wish I could tomorrow, but I have to leave every 90 days and that's a bıt tedıous.
posted by
vogue
on July 7, 2008 at 11:16 PM
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La dulce grande, mujer de mariposa!
Fantastic work, Sinome!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 7, 2008 at 10:59 PM
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Simone, so tenderly and eloquently spoken...read aloud, the softness and yes, dulce - sweetness just flows ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 7, 2008 at 10:50 PM
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WOW! what passion jumps at you from this..It has stirred something in me..may I use this as an inspiration for my pen?
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 7, 2008 at 10:33 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on July 7, 2008 at 10:09 PM
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