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yea, this is so real and well written. i can imagine him and your feelings, we need to get out of 2-D
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gold_dust
on August 23, 2008 at 5:09 AM
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Great poem...
Blimey thats powerful. I wonder who the man was? I really enjoyed that, the way you used brackets in the second section was so perfect, gave the physical impression of a man in a bubble. Really impressive work. I look forward to visiting your blog again soon and hopefully to welcoming you to my own blog. HollyBird.xx
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HollyBird
on July 10, 2008 at 7:31 AM
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