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Such prolific passion throughout this whole poem ~ palpable. Write on Jen...your pen is like gold ~ Elyse


posted by
elysianfields
on July 9, 2008 at 8:45 PM
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Watch out - that rolling stone...
... is headed straight for my tomato plants
posted by Smittenheimer on July 9, 2008 at 8:17 AM | | reply |
PurpleMermaid 11
Now there's a poetic thought luv. Have a happy day
posted by WileyJohn on July 9, 2008 at 8:10 AM | | reply |
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on July 9, 2008 at 4:54 PM
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that man with many faces is scary
posted by
Lanetay
on July 9, 2008 at 12:10 PM
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Purple
I confess some of this one I didn't follow but as I reached the end I think I grasped your meaning... You always offer up an intense write.
posted by
Troosha
on July 9, 2008 at 10:32 AM
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Purple
I am always amazed at the array of words you assemble in a poem
posted by
Azur
on July 9, 2008 at 3:07 AM
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hey there mermaid,
this was fantastic and i had to go back to read it again to get all of it...mike
posted by
meeks2
on July 8, 2008 at 11:57 PM
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The sweet Purple has such variety of emotions to express with such fine words.Beautiful, Mermaid

posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on July 8, 2008 at 10:10 PM
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Beautiful Jen... this is so true my friend, the toughest of them all are sometimes the sweetest. Great poem... I am happy to see the old Jen is back and steamrollering ahead :-)
posted by
Sinome
on July 8, 2008 at 10:01 PM
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Cool, love! like a macho meditation! lol, BCA!
posted by
BC-A
on July 8, 2008 at 9:49 PM
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posted by
magic_moon
on July 8, 2008 at 9:27 PM
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Wow
i mean 'wow' in the best way
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 8, 2008 at 9:07 PM
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Hi there sweet lady who writes such lovely words.
posted by
Kabu
on July 8, 2008 at 8:16 PM
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Well written poem indeed !
posted by afzal50 on July 8, 2008 at 8:09 PM | | reply |
A beautiful addition to your lovely collection of poetry!!
posted by NiteTide on July 8, 2008 at 6:34 PM | | reply |
He sounds like a bad...
Such a lovely person you are dear one
posted by Smittenheimer on July 8, 2008 at 4:22 PM | | reply |
Purple_Mermaid11,
I really do like you and thank you very much for all of the support and encouragement that you have given me since I returned to the network.
posted by Feenix on July 8, 2008 at 4:21 PM | | reply |
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on July 8, 2008 at 8:11 PM
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