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What a powerful poem and full of promise and the imagery is stunning...the feelings - true and meaningful and deep
~ Your poetry is soul stirring.
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 10, 2008 at 7:48 PM
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Beautiful and well expressed !
posted by
afzal50
on July 9, 2008 at 9:00 PM
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Your poem was riveting with images of an angel standing on the precipice of life, wings closed in contemplation, deciding if it should take flight or not...This was a magnificent read. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this from beginning to end!!
Oh and thank you for visiting my blog. I appreciated it.
posted by
NiteTide
on July 9, 2008 at 7:48 PM
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I like the great hope at the end. A fine poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 9, 2008 at 12:15 PM
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Marineair--this is Beautiful! I enjoyed every line of the 'read'! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 9, 2008 at 9:01 AM
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In any event beautiful!
Take care, BCA!
posted by
BC-A
on July 9, 2008 at 3:24 AM
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