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Oh man - this was great
Such a treat for the mind to be captured for a few brief moments in time
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 13, 2008 at 7:52 PM
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Thank you all so much!
I'm glad you're all enjoying my written meanderings. I wish I could be as succint in all my poems. Sadly, it's just not the case, and I fear I just posted another long one. Hope you like it! - Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 10, 2008 at 7:57 PM
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I need to read you more....
I'll have to retrace to see what i 've missed because you are a great writer.
posted by
Kobriel
on July 10, 2008 at 7:49 PM
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WOW~ utter - fine poetry ~ This touched my 'soul' ~ Beautiful in its poignancy. And it's succinct, that last line! Elyse
(thank you for reading my poetry blog---I will enjoy reading yours)
posted by
elysianfields
on July 10, 2008 at 7:46 PM
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This is very beautiful! I enjoyed it so very much, bend to catch rain was an awesome close! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 10, 2008 at 9:21 AM
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Beautiful ~ this is fine poetry!~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 10, 2008 at 6:21 AM
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Very precise.
It's raining over here lately, too, somehow matching my swinging mood lately... And every day I come home from work through pouring rain, little cold tears biting my shoulders, and somehow the rain seems to corelate with my mood (today I'm feeling better, for example, and it's shiny; cool, but not raining anymore).
posted by
hagi
on July 10, 2008 at 2:38 AM
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