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Simply beautiful!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 11, 2008 at 3:21 PM
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Simply put, exquisite imagery that again is filled in poignancy! You are a master poet my friend. Have a great day! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 11, 2008 at 9:33 AM
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...poignant metaphor...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on July 11, 2008 at 2:49 AM
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I am touched, it's beautiful...
posted by
lyknliken
on July 11, 2008 at 12:02 AM
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So deeply poignant your poems are, coming, as they do, from the depths of your heart, that it has the quality of reaching out, and touching others' heart too. The last line rebounds into what will probably become a bright morning tomorrow.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on July 10, 2008 at 11:28 PM
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Good memories are rays of sunshine
that reach inside and melt a frozen heart. Well Done.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 10, 2008 at 11:24 PM
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Deep and profoundly heart wrenching. I'm enjoying your writing so much.
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 10, 2008 at 10:52 PM
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Stunning imagery and powerful emotions are a powerful combination, especially so for a master of the written word. Well done, Joe.
- Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 10, 2008 at 8:04 PM
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Re: NiteTide
Thank you Mindy for your kind words. Don't cry. I did enough of that when I wrote the poem, some years ago. Thank you for your continued support and inspiration.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 10, 2008 at 7:44 PM
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i agree w/ the other posters. this poem is one of your bests.
and that says something about the poem
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 10, 2008 at 7:33 PM
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Stop making me cry!!!!!
Stooooop!!!!
Okay, I kid. Don't stop. This was beautiful...you constantly amaze me with your words.
posted by
NiteTide
on July 10, 2008 at 7:30 PM
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Re: Elyse.
Have I told you Elyse how much I appreciate your comments and support? I do!! I am pleased that you enjoyed the poem.
Joe
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 10, 2008 at 7:29 PM
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Joe, have I ever mentioned that I so like your poetry. It speaks volumes!!! reads remarkably well and I just cant give you enough Kudos...this particular poem touched my heart ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 10, 2008 at 7:17 PM
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