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posted by
Winged
on July 17, 2008 at 8:23 AM
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I feel as though your story is my story.
It brought me to tears. I, too, have
loved and lost. Most of us have. We
have to live the rest of our lives
wondering what might have been.
At least we have memories. I feel
sorry for those who don't.
posted by
Winged
on July 17, 2008 at 8:22 AM
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You need a love for all seasons. Blessings love, lol, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”
posted by
BC-A
on July 15, 2008 at 6:38 AM
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My goodness...this was beautiful. I may have not endured the same trials as you but the lost of love with another I can relate. The feelings of not being wanted or feeling wanted because of the time that has passed us by and the abuse our body has taken with age. Absolutely wonderful. I enjoy your writing. Hope to read more. Thank you for sharing
posted by
dpaulinomorris24
on July 14, 2008 at 11:35 AM
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Cee
As Taps said, this outpouring makes us think about our own love (I believe she said something to that effect). You have had such a journey - one that puts our small complaints in perspective - and yet you are still very much a woman longing and desiring for passion. I think we all want that and yet comfort or complacency kicks in. It's a shame, isn't it?
posted by
Troosha
on July 14, 2008 at 8:49 AM
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How much pain did it cause you my dear to write such a heart-rending epic poem? It's overwhelming. Sorry I'm a little late in replying to your advice about leg cramps. I'll try the bar of soap. Having said that, I feel ashamed of even complaing about such a minor ailment compared to how bravely you deal with your illness. You are a source of inspiration.
posted by
vogue
on July 14, 2008 at 7:04 AM
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LadyCeeMarie, How provocatively you write, making readers think, not only about you and your loves, but about their own. I should say that you have written a sad tale, but I cannot. It is a tale of beauty, of loving, of surviving. It is the tale of human beings from beginning to end and of the struggles they endure to be all that they can be, for as long as they can be. It is the tale of human worth--that is, worthy of being loved no matter what. You are one special lady, LadyCeeMarie.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 13, 2008 at 10:56 AM
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sweet LadyCeeMarie
sometimes I forget to listen - as a man my nature is to fix things when many times that is not the solution.
a little bird once told me that men's hormone levels are a factor related to what I thought I heard you mention and I'd like to take this moment to commend OTA and Sam444 for being such kind souls.
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 12, 2008 at 10:08 PM
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Maybe it's a longer foreplay and that should interest u?
posted by
Straightforward
on July 12, 2008 at 9:06 PM
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Speechless! This is incredulous. It more than epic but has epic proportions written all over it! Congratulations on a very heartfelt write. Way to get it out poetess! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 12, 2008 at 6:22 PM
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you have been through so much
you deserve to vent, and vent you have! You have a beautiful soul,and I am sure your husband realizes that! He is probably in just as much confusion, and pain as you are. Throughout your triumphs you two have grown apart it seems, you two need to turn to eachother again and find a newer and stonger new love......
posted by
2x2mny
on July 12, 2008 at 2:45 PM
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Max
Thank you for your explanation. After reading more of your work, I can see where it's coming from now, I hope! I left you a few more comments this a.m. I'm glad I found you!
Cee
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on July 12, 2008 at 9:28 AM
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Thanks for reading, no venting isn't about anyone on blogit. When I first started on here, I was told I couldn't use "dirty" words, so instead of censoring my writings I use pig latin. It's just so I don't offend any reader, although I don't believe in censorship when it comes to writing.
Max
posted by
contagion_publishing
on July 12, 2008 at 9:16 AM
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OTA
Thank you, sweet of heart, and yes, I'm afraid I did just that.
Cee
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on July 12, 2008 at 8:53 AM
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Dear Lady, You have opened yourself completely with this intimate piece. Thank you for sharing yourself with so much courage , you are indeed a lovely soul. ~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on July 12, 2008 at 8:30 AM
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