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Your daughter shows tremendous depth for her age...
...and talent as a poet.
And leave it to Vicki to come up with the perfect picture for any occasion.
posted by
metalrat
on July 17, 2008 at 3:08 PM
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Awestruck and less confused
You are too kind - Is this not the most amazing poem (for an
any year old) so very Very well done..
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 17, 2008 at 2:15 PM
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Re: Smittenheimer
Actually my 10 year old daughter wrote this..Yes Vicki P found this for me and my daughter, where we then each write a work about it..Sorry for the confusion, glad you enjoyed my daughters work!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 16, 2008 at 10:43 PM
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? who did what now
totally engrossed and then confused (sorry
) You wrote this poem, right?- It was beautiful and then I believe you mentioned that Vicki P arted it up for you. If that's the case then this is a very nice collaboration. Congrats to you both
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 16, 2008 at 3:06 PM
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lovely poem and picture
posted by
lyknliken
on July 15, 2008 at 1:48 AM
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Thank you all sooo much!
I am so happy that you all enjoyed it..I thank you a great deal for taking the time to read her work..Much love to everyone here! You are just a awesome bunch of people!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 15, 2008 at 12:40 AM
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Cloudy Throne (in my granddaughter's words)
Wow. Now we have three of us in the family all striving to obtain computer access. Seriously, my dear granddaughter that was a truly beautiful poem. I am now, and always will be, very proud of you. Write on.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 14, 2008 at 9:10 PM
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Wow, such talent at such a young age...u r a family of poets...
hidden from the world so far like gems in a mine..keep creating & sharing my dear friend!- Ash :)
posted by
ash_pradhan
on July 14, 2008 at 8:17 PM
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10 years! That's some talent there!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 14, 2008 at 3:48 PM
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That's just Wonderful wigopa! I'm not surprised you are proud of her!!Chris
a rose for each of you.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 14, 2008 at 2:02 PM
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And so you should be my friend!
this is indeed a lovely write; thanks for sharing it with us and God bless you and yours
posted by
mariaki
on July 14, 2008 at 5:15 AM
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This touched me deeply...Your daughter is 'gifted' ~ truly has vision - This makes me want to cry ... not for sadness but for the 'depth' - Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 13, 2008 at 9:40 PM
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Seriously, she is quite a talent .. this is better than a lot of poems
I've read on the poetry sites.... tell her I gave her a huge thumbs up!
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 13, 2008 at 9:22 PM
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Awesome,Yes, this poem by your daughter is so crisp and clear. She's an artist with a great imagination. A wonderfully creative writer!
posted by
yellowrose55
on July 13, 2008 at 6:06 PM
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Wow oh wow!!!!!!!! That is a beauty of a poem for a 10 year old to create!!!!!! She has talent! Bravo!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 13, 2008 at 5:50 PM
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